朗阁

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　　小作文：表格题

　　大作文：In some countries, some criminal trials in the court are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

　　朗阁老师杨钰点评

　　1.本次考试难度中等。

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1：静态表格(参考图形如下)

　　The table shows proportion of staffs who finished the study in university in five countries in the year of 1999.

　　中文：1999年5个国家员工完成大学教育的比例对比图

　　ALLWomenMen

　　France 75% 80% 68%

　　Norway 82% 85% 80%

　　Sweden 70% 65% 73%

　　Germany 63% 70% 55%

　　Netherlands 55% 60% 64%

　　注意：1. 静态图，注意大小排序;2.注意时间为1999年，选用过去时;3. 图表中的数据不需要都提及，注意数据的整合。

　　相关表达：

　　(1) It is clear from the chart given that .....was the most….

　　(2) The largest proportion of… was actually seen in…, with +数据

　　(3) The remaining countries saw a completely different pattern as describe above.

　　Task 2 犯罪类话题

　　题目翻译：在一些国家，人们可以通过电观看犯罪的审判过程。这样的利是否大于它的弊?

　　从话题上来说，属于犯罪类，考生可以运用平时对此话题的积累加以论证。

　　从类型上来说，属于议论文中的利弊类，考生只要从合理的角度展开言论，言之有理即可。

　　从结构上来说，可以采取四段式的写法：

　　*段：题目改写+个人观点。

　　第二段：讨论弊端+反驳。

　　第三段：讨论利+拓展论证。

　　第四段：总结段-重申观点。

　　主体段 1:

　　弊端+反驳原创段落：

　　分论点：暴露犯罪细节会造成犯罪率上升，因为会有模仿者。

　　反驳：家长有效监督，这都不是事儿.

　　On the one hand, I have to concede that the broadcast of the trial on TV could exert certain implication in a negative way. By that I mean too much exposure to criminal details could contribute to the rise of criminal rate, because some people, especially teenagers, may imitate the criminal behaviors shown on TV. However, I would argue that such concern could be effectively controlled by giving appropriate parental guidance.

　　主体段 2:

　　利+拓展论证原创段落：

　　分论点：1. 震慑潜在犯罪分子;2.普及法律知识及意识

　　On the other hand, we can never undervalue the potential benefits brought by this policy. For a start, this action could have a deterrent effect on those who intend to commit crimes. To be more precisely, they would give up their evil thoughts after seeing what will probably happen to them if they break the laws. An additional advantage, from my own perspective, is to raise lawful awareness among the public. In daily life, we often hear some stories, telling us how an old man was deceived by fraud and thus beard economic losses, as a result of shortage of lawful knowledge. Programs of the trial on the mass media can draw people’s attention and gradually enable them to gain knowledge in the law and regulations, thus preventing them from criminal activities.

　　考试预测

　　1.小作文：重点关注地图、柱图(重点关注动态图)。

　　2.大作文：重点关注科技媒体、教育文化话题。

　　3.重点浏览2015-2016年写作机经，可借助《*范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。