朗阁

小作文： 动态图(柱状图)

　　大作文： Some school children dislike math.what are the reasons? What are the best ways to make children enjoy learning math?

　　朗阁讲师点评

　　本次考试难度中等。

　　整体分析：

　　Task 1：动态图(bar)条形图，有关一个欧洲国家，1975-2006年男女拥有驾照的占比，另一个时间段17到20岁男女驾照占比。

　　注意：1. 动态图注意观察对象动态变化的特征，找出其中上升下降及波动极值的特征。2.动态图避免只做动态描述，在恰当有关系的地方让两个对象产生横向对比。3.动态图要注意表达的多样性，上升下降等词汇要注意替换表达。相关表达：

　　占据(动词)：account for/ occupy/take up/make up/constitute + 数%

　　比例(名词)：proportion / rate / percentage

　　A experienced a great fluctuation with the peak at+ 数据 and bottom at+数据

　　A increased to +数据， which was the same as the figure of B in +时间

　　A +be动词+数据1，which +be动词+比较级+B(数据2)

　　A+***高级+with+数据+among all the +剩余对象

　　Task 2 ：教育类

　　题目翻译：*不喜欢数学。原因是什么?能让*喜欢学习数学的***佳方式有哪些?

　　该话题为起因，解决方法类题目，重点要把*不喜欢数学的直接原因及间接原因论证充分，否则会缺少逻辑说服力，或出现逻辑跳跃情况。同时建议写两到三条原因会比较充分。解决方式可以根据找出的原因，对应性的给出具体了执行的方法，避免空洞表达。

　　推荐一个四段式的写法：

　　It is true that mathematics is widely recognized as a subject that many students struggle with and often develop a strong dislike. This essay will explore the reasons behind this phenomenon and propose some strategies to address it.

　　The primary reason is that many students find math unengaging. Unlike subjects such as history, science, or languages, which they can relate to more easily, math fails to capture their enthusiasm. They perceive it as a collection of abstract numbers and formulas that lack real-world relevance. Another reason is that learning mathematics can be quite challenging. Mastering this subject involves not only memorizing numerous rules and equations but also developing strong computational skills, spatial reasoning, and logical thinking. For students who do not naturally excel in these areas, it can be overwhelming and frustrating by. 本段论证两个原因，其一是数学参与感弱，所以不容易引起热情，另外一个原因是数学比较难，对学生的要求比较高，容易有溃败感。

　　There are two effective ways to help children improve their mathematics learning. First, fostering interest by highlighting real-world applications is crucial. Introducing them to professionals who use math in their careers can provide valuable insights, while demonstrating how math is involved in daily tasks, such as budgeting or calculating distances, helps children see its practical value. Second, children should be encouraged to embrace challenging tasks, recognizing that difficult problems lead to greater satisfaction when solved. If a child becomes discouraged, reminding them that mistakes are part of the learning process helps build resilience, a lesson valuable both in math and in life.

　　两个方法有助于让学校*喜欢数学学习，其一是通过参与真实*的体验，将数学融入进去，其二是*应该多被鼓励面对挑战，有不怕犯错的精神。

　　In conclusion, students often struggle with math due to its abstract nature and the difficulty of mastering its concepts. However, by making math relevant and encouraging persistence, students can develop a greater understanding and overcome these challenges.

　　考试建议

　　1.小作文：重点关注饼图、线图。

　　2.大作文：重点关注科技，政府类话题。

　　3.重点浏览2020,2021年考试原题，可借助《**范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。